Journal
1. What changes have you made?
I have changed the whole poem around. I have just simply changed the setting and i put a good rythem in. It still has the same: structure, same rytheme scheme and same ideas. I just made the poem for the year 2008 not 1960’s.
2. Why? What does it tell us about changes in Australia?
The peom that i chose is just talking about what happened on Australia Day and all the people that died on that day. So the changes are that we remember those people that died, on Australia Day, we remember them every year.
3. What techniques have you used to reveal these changes (metaphores, similes, personification, onomatopoeia)
I have used metaphores, similes and a rytheme pattern to reveal the changes from 1960’s-2008
4. If you used a technique, why did you choose it? How is it effective in creating meaning?
I choose to use the techniques because if you think about it, without any techniques, it wouldn’t really be a good poem. So that is why i chose the techniques. It is effective by making the poem more interesting and so more readers can look at it.



